I love to write. I have for as long as I can remember I'm a part time singer/songwriter. I've been on here for years. This site takes me back to some of my first poems. I'd love to get feedback on my past to most recent pieces of writing. It's interesting to hear someone else's perspective. |
Though you may not come back
My mind is focused on you...
I fall to my knees
My energy drained out...
Night and day, I think of you
Your smile, your laugh...
I need you,
To help me thorugh this pain...
Imagine a strong hand,
Delicately placed in yours...
They call her "bright eyes"
Purity that lives within...
He's a man, with an innocent face
Hiding behind, a manic man's place...
Emotions gone rapid
She stands lonely, despaired...
Eyes of the sea,
Soft and kind...