Hello everyone, i really do appreciate comments and would really enjoy knowing how well i write. i already know how i feel about how i write and i would really like to get some comments that either compliment my writing or that explain what i could do better for another poem that i may write later on. Either way i am open to any comments, suggestions or whatever.. i will most likely return the favor. |
Just throw me in a cage,
everyone will be amuse...
Look at me
look at me, please...
I'm trapped in a closet
A closet that no one sees...
I sit on the side lines |
Sing me to sleep, so i can wake with your voice [ringing] in my {head} |