I am 24 I love writing and reading poetry it would mean alot to me if people would comment on my poems and be truthful I want to know if their good or not |
How can I just let you walk out of my life
when we never even attempted to talk...
Sweet child of mine take my hand and I will be...
But there will come a time I will have to let go...
There is this pain deep inside
That I just can't seem to erase...
I walk outside to get away
Today my heart got ripped out...
I lay here on my bed
words spinning throughout my head...
I've never told you how I feel
just understand I try to deal...
A childs touch only a real parent could describe! |
A world without sin is a world no man could describe. |
Live each day like it is your last |