Hi Everyone its Joclyn I started a new thing because i have alot of old poems that i wrote when i was younger and i would like them commented on to see how much ive improved since then!!! Thanx it would mean alot to me if you did!!! |
When I look at me,
I see a girl sad and depressed...
This poem is dedicated to Mr. Yanni
A great teacher...
Some times I feel lonely
Like no one can see me...
Sometimes I feel like I'm on my own
like I'm all alone...
A crowd of friends walking,
friends talking, couples hand in hand...
LOVE
Makes you feel like you floating...
Some times I feel lonely
Like no one can see me...
Music is an inspiration to the mind
it can motivate your feelings...