i want to improve my poetry so any constuctive crtisism would be appreciated. |
As i see that girl,
i wonder what troubles her so...
There is a blank page,
staring at me...
Inside her soul i look,
she stares back at me...
A friendship should be,
filled with love...
I see a lonely girl,
she is smiling...
She could not lose her emotion,
That is what drove her heart...
I strong,
I have accepted my weakness...
Its a long journey a Bird makes on first time...
So much to see and lots to learn yet life at...
Fables, stories, tales and myths,
and even the oldest legends...
Many search the oceans depth,
and cross the hottest deserts known...
I remember when the simple act of holding hands made me smile |
Want to travel to two places for the price of one? |
As long as we are alive tomorrow will come. |