If i talk...will you secretly listen?
if i cry...wil you secretly care?
if i laugh...will you quietly wonder why?
if i need you...will you be there?
And if i died tomorrow...would you know i loved you?

Hold her tight and don't let go
Hide this pain she cannot show,
Look beyond her broken eyes
To a heart that's paralyzed,

Thats from my new poem "Letting Go"
I know you hate this but could you give me some feedback on it? THANX!!

Last night I prayed...the Lord my soul to keep...then I cryed myself to sleep...thinking life wouldn't go on without you...

Rain pounds on the sidewalk
Wind whispers through her hair
Tears slide down her cheeks
As she walks with her despair

Please chk out my new poem "Walking in the Rain" ill return the favor! thnx!

Hey people i know you hate this but could you check out my poems and comment them? please? i need some feedback! thnx and ill return the favor!

HEY PEOPLE!!!! plz go comment my poems! it would mean alot!! thnx and ill return the favor!!

*KaLiN*

I try and I try...but this pain holds me down...I cry and I cry...but in these tears I drown!

*gay but it was spur of the moment!

How did this happen? How can I just lose his love? Did I screw up? Was it the trust? or both of the above?

Wanna know how it ends? go check out my poem!! thanx!!