please comment on my poems |
Your honesty faltered,
and your treachery knew no bounds...
I try to find the good in life
but their just too hard to find...
Emptiness is all encompassing
it chokes you from the inside...
I wake up and go to sleep with teardrops in my...
and i really don't see the point of life...
You left me, tired and bruised
left me weak, broken and confused...
You went from the boy whose face i cant erase
to the boy who was surprisingly easy to replace...
Life with men is like a deck of cards: |
The only thing you were ever good at was leaving me behind |