I've been writing poems for quite awhile now. I've been told they are pretty good but I'm not so sure. I guess I'll find out. So please comment on them and tell me what you think. |
Every moment that passes by
I sit and wonder why...
How could one guy
Hurt one girl...
*I know it's kind of long but please read...
I just sit and wait for your call...
*This poem is dedicated to my dad who died...
You were the strongest person I ever knew...
You lay passed out on the floor
From all of the alcohol you have consumed...
I am who I am
And I like that a lot...
I used to have such a miserable life
One I solved by using a knife...
This is based on a real event in my life.
I'd finally had enough...
I always have tears in my eyes
Because no one hears my silent cries...
I see you watching me
Even while you're holding hands with her...
He turned and looked into her e.y.e.s. and said I don't hate you and just when she was beginning to have a little bit of [hope] he shattered her heart into a million more pieces and said I despise you instead |
Once a c.u.t.t.e.r always a c.u.t.t.e.r. unless they [forget] the past and move themselves into the *light* |
I've learned teddybears don't make everything ok and crying doesn't make all the pain go away. |