This veneer works like a charm

for no one seems to know of my pain

You're all i want
you're all i need.
without you here,
i just ::cant breathe::

And as you screamed curses at me,
horror flooded my heart.
sticks and stones are nothing, love,
compared to words so tart.

^its a part of my poem! "i saw".

I stare, longing at you
you tricked me with your veneer

i see through it now
and watch as you stare longingly at her

while im dying alone in the corner

I have three new poems

and i'd love comments on how to improve

The longer i wait,
the longer the gap.

the longer i wait,
the longer im trapped..

--julia

check out my poems.!

Dont you hate it when it always rains on your parade?
dont you hate it when the brightest flowers start to fade?

read the rest of the poem; "dont you hate it?"

and check out my other poems!

Now our once light love drops deeper each day,
The bright hues we once knew r now shades of gray.
i love u but cant stand the pain this love brings,
goodbye love, this is the last song well sing.
^part of my poem, Remember. comments?

Heres to the past, although now its long gone,
Heres to the past, before our love was wronged.
Heres to the past, with its glimmering veil,
Heres to the past, we now bid thee farewell.

new poem, a toast to the past. comments?

My soul is cleansed, but I’m not free.
For storms are raging inside me.

part of my new poem "Storms"

i would appreciate comments/ratings