*What do you do if the one you have to live without, is the one your living for?*~mer~

So i dont normally do this. I would really like to get some feedback. It is a relationship poem and its called Confusion. it is in the slang category due to one word that i used. i would really appreciate the constructive criticism. thanks!

Hey I'm sorry to do this... but i would really appreciate some feedback on my 2 new poems... they are (1) The Desire to Sin and (2) Today is Chapter One.... i would love to hear what all you guys think... THANKS!!! ~mer~

Hey sorry if you guys wouldnt mind coming and commenting on my poems control and the day i almost lost her... i would really appreciate it!!! thanks ~mer~

Hey sorry ... if yall wouldnt mind coming and commenting on my poems destructed love and staring contest i would really appreciate it!!!! thanks! ~mer~

Dont dwell on the dream, and forget to live

He made me glad to be alive,
But you gave me the reason to live

God screwed up
And then got really smart......
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And made women

Love isnt blind, it is forgiving.

Real Conversation:
*caroline: I LOVYE you mark!!!
~Mark: Caro you cant spell 4 letter words, I can listen..... R-E-A-D.... is read... And jerk is spelled G-E-R-K ... oh crap... (click...(phone hanging up))...