Hey! please read my pomes and help me improve them! i really need some help! thanks everyone!

Nothing last forever, forever is a lie...the only thing we have is between hello & goodbye

I am jelious of every girl that has ever huged you...becasue for that very moment...they held my world....:(

Why is it that the one i love the most is the farthest from me??
Where is my Hanna??

Do you know what its like to be me?
To go thru something not everyone can see??

Do you know what its like to walk in my shoes? when everyday...i wish i was you....

The tears fall down.
My kness hit the ground.
My head pounds.
I start to scream.
why'd this happen...
all to me?

The smile on my face isnt real.
The feelings im showing, arnt how i feel.
The pain that hurts inside never really ends....
I wish we could go back, to before I said "just friends".

*either* (face) the [music] or //turn// {off} the
$/$/radio$/$/

All I want is a guy who
would memorize my
favorite song, just to
sing it to me when I'm feeling down

This is 4 the girls who have left sad sayings in their away messages who have tried 2 make some1 understand by tears who have time and time again dropped their guy friend hint after hint only 2 watch him chase after the next
blonde thing in a skirt.