I'm very new to poetry, and just writing in general though it interests me. My friend showed me this site [she's a great poet by the wayy ( : loveyoustephh] anyways any criticism is totally appreciated |
Down on the patio
I watched him from above...
Her breath was shaky
As tears rolled down her cheek...
Feet sped down the hallway,
No one noticed her walk by...
Pushing hard with her blade
Blood slowly rose to the skin...
Feet sped down the hallway,
No one noticed her walk by...
Her breath was shaky
As tears rolled down her cheek...
Down on the patio
I watched him from above...