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Oh no these thoughts forever are surrounding me
and i can feel that they're moving in so slow...
Until I close my eyes
I'm never alone...
Here you go, watch the second hand move in circles
Calendars flipping like a cartoon made on the...
Paradise, hearing the waves of the ocean crashing...
a continuous peaceful sound...
City lights
so bright...
Just a feather floating gently in the breeze
Waiting so long just to make it on the ground...
Searching through the darkness in my mind
into some light i'll find...
Let me think now, just give me a moment
a minute to reflect to look back in the blink of...
Crowded streets wrap around a golden river
take my hand and i will lead you...
I can see the breeze
touching me, surrounding my face...
Paradise |
I wanna be with you forever |