Heyy please coukd you comment some of my poems please =]
it would mean alot to me
and i will always comment back =]
its my first time on here soo...

alice
xxxxxx

.So Why Cant You See Through The Black Make up And Dark Clothes And Love Me For Who I Am ?Is That So Much To Ask ? ='[

Id rather go [blind] than to see you walk away from me
Id rather go [deaf] than to hear you say you hate me
Id give up [all] things just to be with you
Because what’s .e.v.e.r.y.t.h.i.n.g. if I don have you?

Lost in the darkness, hoping for a sign Instead there's only silence, can’t you hear my screams?...

{ x Anyone x } can make you smile and anyone can make you {x cry x }

but it takes someone { x special x}

to make you { x smile x } when you already have { x tears x } in your eyes.

&& the truth is, you could {{rip}} out my heart,

throw it on the [[floor]] stamp on it...

x&&xi'd still smile...

because you [[touched]] me

One boy...
one girl...
two harts....
their world...

Lets commit
the most perfect crime
ill steal your hart
and you steal mine

I Know You Never Loved Me Or That You Possibly Ever Could....So Why Did You Break My Hart Telling Me That You Did ?

Only When The Last Tree Has Died, && The Last River Been Poisoned, && The Last Fish Been Caught, Will We Realise That We Cannot Eat Money...