Heyy please coukd you comment some of my poems please =]
it would mean alot to me
and i will always comment back =]
its my first time on here soo...

alice
xxxxxx

I hide the \scars/,smother the screams and |dry| the tears...still no [[one]] cares , on one sees...

Whats happening to me?
i [[love]] you and you::love::me
but i still have to cut and /cry/ away the pain ....

I just cant understand
everyone else gets ((noticed)), everyone else gets found out
but i [[still]] wear this +fake+ smile waiting for someone to care...

If I never saw you again
Id not be able to survive
You understand all my worries
You help keep me alive

from one of my new poems....Dear kaytie
please check it out i will always return the favor =]
alice

I lie here and ::cry::

::cry::all the tears of
/pain/
=hurt=
betrale

that im ((forced)) to live through every day

it just carries on
but not for much longer

Never mind me {{alone}} in the corner
just crying....bleeding
thats /all/
nothing.No one ::important::

Shes looks into the [[mirror]]
::hoping:: the girl she sees
is not her...
then...she realises *what* shes become///
a N.O.T.H.I.N.G

Who to tell??
[no] one to [care].
living my life,
myworst .::nightmare::.

Just a [beautiful] lie
a worthless reject