My poems are still developing. Most of the paragraphs in a single poem will match, but sometimes I have paragraphs that don't seem to go together. Comments and constructive critisism would be appriciated. |
I try to scream in agony-
I can't...
Lands of dark torment
That is all I see...
I don't know why I do it
I don't know why you care...
Another day
locked up in my room...
Another soul, turning black
Forgotten on the way...