Please check out my new poem 'our country' and comment. I really put my heart into this one and would really really like some feedbak on it. leave your name and ill return the favour. So please check it out.

The girl you see here isnt me
the girl you see has cuts on her wrists
the girl you see is sad all the time
the girl you see cries herself to sleep
oh wait -- the girl you see is me

The girl you see here isnt me
the girl you see has cuts on her wrists
the girl you see is sad all the time
the girl you see cries herself to sleep
oh wait -- the girl you see is me

I turn to the blade and i fall to the ground
i hear footsteps running then sirens
then before i die i hear one last voice,
im sorry but this girl has died from a broken heart

Its so hard to cover up in front of everybody you pull your sleeves down and then put a fake smile on your face

I feel a loss of words
u dont know what its like
to be me
always on the outside loooking in
never feeling happy
turning to that blade to give me relief
you dont understand
nobody does
nobody ever will

Hey
please comment on my poems and quotes!
i will return the favour
thnxx guys

She sits in darkness
holding back her tears
She picks up that knife
and confronts her fears
Her world goes black and she hits the ground
crying her ruby red tears

The light shines on that silver blade
and i watch it make my pain fade
i wish i could get away from it all
as i watch it make my red tears fall

I just want to break down and cry and tell everyone whats wrong.
But i dont, i just put that damn fake smile back on my face and say the words "im fine"