**** Heya plz read my poem "I Am"
im new and any help/comments would be really appreciated thank you ****

Her heart beats
She feels pain,
Her eyes open
She sees pain,
Her hands move
She causes pain.

Ever feel like you diagonally parked in a parrellel universe?

Why did you say it if you knew you didn't mean it?

I fold in the game of life.

The blood stained razor comes back for more
I welcome it with a smile.

I hope the heart isnt a vital organ,
because you just ripped mine out