I just want you to feel the same way I do. I want you to appreciate my work, the way I appreciate yours. When I honsety make a comment on your poem, why cant you just do the same...? I know i'm nothing special, I dont write them because I think there amazing, there my personal expression. My deepest thoughts and feelings. Half of them dont even make sense! Just some girls views, on some of my worlds abuse. so please stop telling me lies.HEY GUYS I READ THE SWEETEST LITTLE POEM THE OTHER DAY, CALLED 'BELOVED BROWNIES' BY PICKLE. IT IS REALLY LOVELY. ITS BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE A LITTLE GIRLS POEM HAS MADE ME SMILE SO MUCH. CHECK IT OUT GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Don't go,
I need you here...
Shall i look at you?
Stare into your eyes...
I care for only you,
I dream of us together...
Out of my life,
Out of this world...
--*Drink with the world!*--
One more sip to take me away...
Everytime is different,
These words always change...
One Drained Heart,
Squeezed of Blood...
A heart is all i want,
A dream i've always had...
Sleeping,
I lack the energy needed...
The phone rings,
Echoed off the walls...
A descreet release of beauty gracefully drugs my pain. |
Are you complete? |