I know I am only sixteen, (fifteen when I wrote the first poem), but writing is everything to me, and I really would like to know if you all think I have any potential. I would really appreciate any constructive criticism. |
As she cries herself to sleep,
She weeps, thinking...
Councilors say I am depressed
Family calls it over stress...
Councilors say I am depressed
Family calls it over stress...
As she cries herself to sleep,
She weeps, thinking...
"You cannot undserstand someone until you look beyond the obvious and search into the depths to realize what events occured to make them the way they are." |