[I love poetry. i mostly write free verse poems but now i'm working on the whole flow thing more. I think I like reading others poetry almost as much as I love writing poetry. I have been writing poems since I was in 7th grade and I am now a senior :) . I admit that I used to suck at writing but I am getting better. I have written close to 200 poems since 7th grade. it's not as much as I would like it to be but we all have lives and sometimes i just can't find the time to write. but its definitely back on my high priority list. I am becoming more dedicated to writing and I only post poems that I really really like. If you could all do me a favor and critique my work and be honest on what I need to work on, that would be amazing.] :) |
What happens if I walk away
And leave my heart in your hands...
The light breeze from the open window sent chills...
I watched the rain slowly drip from the sky...
Today I wrote you a letter.
I poured out my heart and soul...
Waves crash upon the hot, white sand of a lonely...
You're the only one around...
Footprints in the sand.
Quickly washed away by waves...
This is a redo of my poem, Happiness (2)
Each day could be a new beginning...
The once tingly feeling I felt
When you would caress my arm...
Each day could be a new beginning.
However my darkest thoughts keep spinning...
You're rubbing salt in my wounds.
The saddest of songs, you have tuned...
I think I am falling in love.
With someone so real and so true...
Hold on to what you love. Stay true to what you know. Take everything you dream of, and never let it go. |
Life's not about how many breaths you take, but what you do with those breaths. |
Don't let your happenings destroy your happiness. |