Hey um i just submittied a new poem so plz check it out and comment it thnx

Cause I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dying

Unfaithful- Rhianna

PLZ COMMENT MY POEM "I NEVER KNEW"..PLZ I NEED FEED BACK..THNX

U say we r better off as friends,then u wanna f**k me, an then u change ur mind again, i cant wait around 4ever for u 2 makeup ur mind, and u cant wait for her to decide if she loves u or not, she dont kno wat she wants & either do, but i kno i do!

We cant call each other friends,we cant call each other lovers, so how bout best friends forever!