um... I've been coming to this site for a while and I've read some really good poems. I just started writing so I don't know how good they are. Please rate and comment... it would be much appriciated. |
I live in a fantasy world,
where he's with me...
Why do I love him,
after the way he broke my heart...
I'm in love with a guy,
but he doesn't know it...
I miss us,
I miss you and I...
No sleep for me,
insomnia takes my breath...
What am I afraid of?
Why don't I just give in...
It's really boring,
Having nothing to do...
We have a lot in common,
My best friend and I...
I deserve to die,
what's the point of having me live...
Depression sinks in,
I'm dying slowly...
HELP!!! I really need help on one of my poems, I'm stuck on one line and have a bit of writters block. if anyone can help me, message me and I will send you what I have already. I will make sure to mention that you helped me on it. |
Why must he hurt me? |
Choke back tears, fake a smile |