well I don't know if this helps, but I'll add a bit. My poetry is at best ambient. I guess too that is more lyrical than anything. And no, it doesn't have to rhyme, but it does anyway because I'm ocd and can't capture a rythm without it having some sort of rhyme scheme. PLEASE let me know what you think. That's why I publish here, to get feedback. Thanks. |
Intellect is a flirtation
So please don't mind if inside I cheer...
Jack and Jill went up a hill,
Needing more than simple water...
Jack and Jill went up a hill,
Needing more than simple water...
What is that mask you wear?
I've seen you someplace before...
This is just a message
And only for the finder...
Where then disappearing behind the cumulus again
Did the sun go...
Rhyme is the road-block in the path I should be...
Yeah a good back-track might serve right...