A young girl trying to write poems. Expressing her feelings the best way I know how. Hoping to get some advice from the great poets on here to better my skills. Any comments good or bad let me know. Please take the a moment of your time and comment me if you voted. Thanks |
Our love once strong
Now parts of my trust for you is gone...
Question this confused girl
Her insecurity take over even though you're her...
Once was here now you're gone
Cry fire tears, you no longer care...
Before you I had no meaning
My life was unbearable...
Loving you is a joyful thing
You make my heart flutter...
"2 people 2gether 4ever 1 love equals 9 stop love" |
"your heart has to hurt before it finds true love" |
"a person doesn't make another whole, the love of a soul is what makes you whole" |