so i was on here like a yr ago and thn i lost interest in my writting and now im back at it but pretty rusty so comments r much appreciated ... harsh criticism is ok as long as its constructive to my writting ..... |
I would have never been there that night
with every will i had...
Tortured through pain and distrust
all alone with noting...
All i needed was one person
someone to tell me...
Life's so empty
and I'm so lost...
What really happens behind closed doors?
nobody knows what is truth...
Life's so empty
and I'm so lost...
All i needed was one person
someone to tell me...
Tortured through pain and distrust
all alone with noting...
I would have never been there that night
with every will i had...
"Everytime i smile, my heart is breaking, and everytime i laugh, im fighting back tears, and if u took the time to care youd know that i was empty.... but if u took the time to ask, id tell u that im already gone. |