im new to composing poems... hope you'll send me some comments on how to improve it... thanks... |
Am i lost in the wilderness....
am i taking the right path...
Years had passed....
thru all the happiness and pains...
Know i must have been so busy with life...
that i seemed to forgot u Lord...
I want to think i am a girl turning to a woman...
from a caterpillar ... now changed into someone...
Started in a simple hi and hello....
and our friendship bloom...
When u started to dream...
and started to plan...
You're the light that shines my life...
Makes me feel warm... and unafraid of the dark...
Burst like an angry lion....
down the lava to the ground...
I want to think i am a girl turning to a woman...
from a caterpillar ... now changed into someone...
"when all is blurred and dim.... let me be the sunshine in your life" |