Please please comment my love poems

i need help thankyou x x x

Can you please comment on my poem about broken friendships
'i thought i would never end'
thank you i promise to return to favour
i need to no what you think

Can you please comment on my poem about broken friendships
'i thought i would never end'
thank you i promise to return to favour
i need to no what you think

Can you please comment my poem 'its you' i'll return the favor, thank you

Can you please comment my poem 'its you' i'll return the favor. thank you

Do you ever think about me!

It would be so much easier if you didn't love her

I looked in to your eyes looking back at me, o how i wish that moment lasted forver

I listen to you tell everyone about her,
why could'nt that me

I would give up my life to just hold you one more time