You may not think my poems are great, but if you gave me some pointers, I could make them better. I have gotten a comment on one of my poems that I am an awful poet and my profile sucks. Gosh. Anyway, does anyone think other wise? I need someone to help me start writing about something else besides lost love and depressing poems. I am not truely like that. I am going to read more poems to help me get more ideas on what to write about. Comment on my poems, or something, so I can start writing something else...I dont want to be the kind of poet wearing black and being all depressed, so help me out!! Kthxbai. |
You brought me down too low.
Now I'm gonna crack...
I'm just trying to live
So someone help me...
They knew each other
For a few good years...
Breaking hearts, cause I love you.
Doubting us cause we're apart...
I used to love you.
It came from my heart...
I just wonder sometimes
If I love you like before...
I want to be more free than a tamed lion. I want to be more free than a slave. |