Hi my name is colby. I have been writing poetry for about 2 years now. Im 16 blonde hair and blueish eyes. Im in 9th grade. I love writing and always will. It helps move through life. I have a couple inspirations... My girl, what her and I go through, school, and my feelings. Please read/rate/comment my poems. Any comments would be fine.. whether its critiquing them or not it does not matter. But please be honest. If you do chances are I will return the favor to anyone who does it. |
For you to understand this one you have to know...
I was in this crowd...
I could search beyond the never ending stars
Beyond the depths of the deepest oceans...
This poem is suppose to describe how I feel
A world of feelings that are so real...
Above every cloud there's a ray of light
With every thought your in my sight...
Laying there I asked her
If she would hold my cold pale hand...
Fire upon the never ending stars
Wish upon all the ones that aren't far...
I'm so torn between these different lives
Between all the untold lies...
Love is a beauty to bright to see |
Hand to Hand we are together |
The most buetiful thing about life is that you are living it... so dont stop |