I'm 15 and havent been writing for the longest time. Yes, my spelling is horrible but I'm always up for being corrected. I post my poems up here for people to criticise them, so be blunt; my feelings arent hurt that easily. Have fun. All the poems are true except for names (exception for Death on a Steamy Night.) |
I cant stand the 4th stanza, any ideas...
Walk a little farther
In this cold forgotten winter...
I screamed your name into the moonlit night.
I hoped to hear my name returned, but instead i...
I'm remember those hazy days.
Filled with alcohol and drugs...
You are the people i hold on to.
The ones i spend nights talking to on the phone...
"Too long of a wait,"
you said, my heart was being shreaded...