I am a beginning poet but I would really appreciate people's views of my poems. I won't get offended if you rate me a 1 or 2. I just need some advice on how to make it better if it can be saved..lol. |
You can trust me baby
I'm not like any other girl...
I had the best day
Of my little life...
Broken hearted
I lie here awake...
Stay with me
Forever and ever...
I thank God
Everyday I breathe...