HEY GUYS AND GIRLS MY NAME IS BETHANY AND I WRITE POEMS AND SO DOES MY FRIEND YVONNE SHE IS BETTER THAN ME I THINK BUT SHE IS NEW AND IF YOU COULD COMMENT HER POEMS I WOULD BE GLAD. ALSO IF YOU CAN COMMENT MINE |
Heartbreak
My mistake...
Are you the one
God put in my path...
Why can't I let you go?
I say yes, my heart says no...
If you had loved me
you wouldn't have let me go...
I thought you were my friend
I guess your not...
When i think of you
a smile appears on my face...
She isn't the reason
thats hard to believe...
What do you do...
when your supposable best friend...
I finally confessed
how I felt about you...
I remember every word
every moment on that day...
I finally found him |
Just when i lost hope he walked through my semi-closed heart |
Can you please comment my poems " not a true friend" and " keep your dignity" thanks i will return the favor |