Save me from my broken heart
Help me get a brand new start

Just when i lost hope he walked through my semi-closed heart

Can you please comment my poems " not a true friend" and " keep your dignity" thanks i will return the favor

HEY GUYS AND GIRLS CAN YOU PLEASE COMMENT MY POEMS I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT AND I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR

CAN YOU PLEASE COMMENT ON MY NEW POEM AND OTHER POEMS PLZ I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR.

You caught my eye
and it wouldn't let go

Riding in the car
knowing your not far
understanding you
is like wishing on a star

You're eyes so beautiful
you're smile so grand
i hope one day
i'll feel the warmth of your hand

I'm lost
help me find the way to your heart

Leaving the past behind
hoping you will be mine.