Riding in the car
knowing your not far
understanding you
is like wishing on a star

You caught my eye
and it wouldn't let go

CAN YOU PLEASE COMMENT ON MY NEW POEM AND OTHER POEMS PLZ I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR.

HEY GUYS AND GIRLS CAN YOU PLEASE COMMENT MY POEMS I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT AND I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR

Can you please comment my poems " not a true friend" and " keep your dignity" thanks i will return the favor

Just when i lost hope he walked through my semi-closed heart

I finally found him
the one thats meant for me
he is my dream come true
its with him i want to be
He makes me want to do better
im no longer blue
as of now
hes the one i choose