Im just a 14 year older who doesnt know anything about poetry please give me some advice and critique =] and maybe some encouragement..oh yeah and please tell me which poem you are talking about if you send me messages. :) |
All my life you have been here for me,
Since birth, to now, and the future we can't see...
There I was dribbling down the court,
This is a cool game of some sort...
In this world we exist,
In this world we make a fist...
If there were a day that your love for me would...
If there is a day that you will dump me...
I think of you everyday,
Everyday I go pray...