PLease someone comment me about this poem
I need help I am really caught up on a big mess...

The darkness of the loneliness,
has taken them apart...

Sadness has come Knocking our doors
We just lost Grandma and now you are gone...

What have u done ?
yesterday we just to dream...

As I sit in here
looking for you on my screen...

In the dark back street
you hear a noise...