hey, so i love to write and i thought that this would be a really good chance for me to get my poems or pieces of writing out there and see what other people think....so give me your thoughts on my writing whether its good or bad....i can take it!!!...lol...and if anyone just wants to talk....im here for that too!!! peace!!! |
Staring in the mirror,
Examining my face...
Out by a tree,
I see a limb...
I thought you knew I loved you,
I thought you knew I cared,, but instead you took...
Hanging my a thread,
Just wasting away...
You were so beautiful,
You were so nice...
She asked, "if i walked away would you come after me?" |