I have always written poetry, and honestly, never shared it. This is my first time actually putting myself "out there", as it were, and I am eager to recieve feedback. My poetry ranges from dark, depressed reminiscence of my younger days, to the more 'spoken word' type of poetry...I spent 3 years living with a hip-hop artist, and am facinated with the 'sound' of poetry, freestyling and such. I would love to learn more about the "technical" aspects of writing poetry, so any suggetions are appreciated! Thanks a bunch! |
Crisp cold
creates clear sky...
The loss...
the vacancy caused by that which barely was...
Come into this open hand,
Extended, helping you to stand...
Crisp cold
creates clear sky...
The table, divided like city streets
by lines of fairy dust on wings...
Too much focus on the what, the go-here go-there...
I'm looking for the why, the whats-on-the-way...