hi i would just like to say i love all your poems and would really like if you could tell me what you think of my poems.your comment really means alot to me.thank you for reading this,i love writing poems&i love writing too i am in the middle of writing a book,i have wrote over a hundred poems i hope to do lots more sorry i havent put them on the site i am to lazy,but i will, in the meantime i will keep putting other poems on this site |
Listen to me
and stop looking away...
When the wind blows
and the rain comes down...
You frowned and looked so sad
my heart bled for him one last time...
He shot himself
cause he was sick of life...
I feel weak to my knee's
its pulling me down...
Kick me dig me do what you want
for i am sick of your mental abuse...