I'm not the best poet, I haven't taken alot of classes and it's not a big priority or a passion, it's just the best way I've found to get my point across. I do hope to one day be a really good poet, and it would help to recieve critizism and advice and whatnot. What I don't want are snotty remarks and negative remarks, I am trying. But I also don't want everything sugarcoated. If there is something i could improve on, let me know, I can handle it! Thanks for your help, I hope you enjoy my poems! (= |
The night was a dark curtain
The moon was a full bright disk...
You are here,
fear doesn't exist...
For every dream, there is a meaning.
For every tear, there is a song...
I see beauty dance,
Pain and sorrow, weep...
As the air withdraws,
and the song loses its sweet tune...
In your eyes,
I see it all...
In harmony with the wind's gentle tune,
The snow falls in a soft quiet beat...
Daddy where'd you go?
I woke up and you where gone...
I feel your arms
You hold me close...
My last full breathe,
the feet i use to walk...
Life's too short to keep the same hair color. |
Tired, but I can't sleep. Hungry, but I can't eat. Sad, but I can't cry. Over, but I can't die. |
"Life gets hard. It changes pace right when you start to figure it out. People you were once obsessed with, become people you need. And people you need, become people who hurt you." |