i dont claim to write well. I write when im upset or extremely happy what i write is what i feel. you cant judge emoition. ill take your critizism but please dont just write its good and thats all. bit vague. i would like to know what i did right and what i did wrong. hah well yeah = ] |
The echoing sound of my heart pattering gets...
each beat sends a shiver down my pale spine...
You sit here and watch the world pass you
fall down on the ground and throw your hands up in...
---It's ridiculous these day
you stop breathing everytime...
My smile convinces you that I'm alright.
This shiny blade says otherwise...
These hands
Seem so empty...