I've only been writing poetry for a few months, so I have much to learn about just the basics of poetry, but I am learning a little more each day. I would greatly appreciate any comments or suggestions. Thanks in advance. |
Ya can call me...
but, I...
A luminous cutting edge piercing midnight,
silently revolving on a lonesome tower...
Alluringly mesmorizing is the sea;
A grand display of symmetry supreme...
Speckled fragments of slate,
glass polished by the sea...