Tell me whats better this or its original?
searching searching searching...

Do u see the scars on her arms?
or the pain in her eyes...

I cant wait 4 the sun 2 shine
for the birds or the smell of pine...

U amaze me
you make me want to b like u...

~ means first paragraph (its supposed to b a song)
She looks so confident and cool...

Swaying in the sun
splashes of color painted into a green Field...

I used to have to deal with so much pain
only now do I see its gain...

Do you know how bad it hurts?
to not be trusted...

The ring of my cell phone
to know someone cares...

He loves me it's true!
so..... what do I do...

What do u see when u look at me
is it who I wanna be...

They'd look up to me
if they only knew...