So I'm mainly posting some of my poems because I'm a little "insecure" about them. Please read them! Tell me what you think. I'll accept contructive critisism. Not many people close to me know that I write. It is truley a very personal behavior, but I love writing. I'd appreciate all comments and ratings. If you take the time to recognize mine, I'd be interested in reading yours. |
Working day to day,
Trying to get by...
Feeling so alive,
I have never felt this good...
Dear Mommy,
You brought me into this world...
Why am I stuck
In this place I should not be...
I was not crazy
I was just playing fair...
You killed me inside
You left me in pieces...
Why are these faded memories stabbing me
Like a knife cutting deep into my heart...
Love is eternal |
I wanted it so bad |
I'm feeling lost inside |