writing has been a huge passion of mine for many years. i don't have many friends that have an interest in it, so i don't really get much criticism although, i would like some. i have been posting my work on here for quite some time, but i haven't really been very active with it. i am hoping to become more active with my writing in the next couple of months. any comments or suggestions of any kind are much appreciated and i will , of course, return the favor. |
Don't close the door
on the world...
Enter now into a realm of existance
without the fire without resistance...
Leave a wake you're unaware of
these are the most fulfilling compliments...
I watch you think
in question...
Words escape me at this moment
the travels i have seen are frozen...
Too many times do we question our truths
as we walk asleep numbing our youth...
I tried so hard to figure out what i did wrong...
the time that it took was too long// my heart has...
In search of something better, in search of...
my normal grand selection has faded to so few...
Jokes in a choke-hold: a throat of...
a master in this class; ignoring the repercussions...
Words escape me at this moment
the travels i have seen are frozen...
While upon the wrong situation---i always IMMEDIATELY know the RIGHT answer and chose to act on the wrong one..... |
Fear only that |