okay so....i'm completely new ^^ and i thought i'd come here to read some peotry and get some critique :) |
I see you there
hanging by a thread...
Lying dead
in the snow...
I scream
i cry...
You may say i'm crazy
you may say i'm insane...
There once was a man named Dan
he had blood all over his hands...
Time stands still
a silent kill...