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Sometimes I take chances...

Have you seen him laugh and cry?
He does it the same time...

Your hands,
Like the softness...

I'm getting up from this cold hard seat,
And I'm gonna find you...

I'm looking for him,
A guy that is nice...

In life there's friends and enemies,
Friends that you love...

In all my years,
Of being alive...

If you ever need someone to love,
You can count on me...

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All my life I loved him...

A broken heart can never mend,
There is just to much pain...

When I saw him at prom night,
I wanted him to be mine...

When a road comes to a dead end,
Find a way around it...