hello my name is blake and i just recently started poetry and most of the poems i have read so far have touched me very much and i am very glad that i found this website. because finally i have a place to express myself. and please comment my poems so i can see how im doing and i dont care if you dont like them if not then give me some pointers on what to do, i just want to know what you think about them |
Why did she make me do this?
all I wanted was one last kiss...
Why do i love you so?
when you use to beat me years ago...
Why do i love you so?
when you use to beat me years ago...
I don't know what to do anymore
should i spill my blood on the floor...
If only you knew how much i cared
then maybe you wouldn't have been scared...
"I don't know why
I keep thinking about you...
Why did she make me do this?
all I wanted was one last kiss...
It takes a couple seconds to say hello |
As i try and drink away |
Pain is weakness |