What to say; well I'm finding my way through my poems, which express my philosophy and emotions. I am a person with a many ideas but have trouble completing them. Even though my main focus lately has been song like poems I intend on trying different; critique my poems and I will gladly return the favor. I don't mind hard critiques. |
Praise soda, the synthetically colored nectar
Pumped with sugar and empty calories...
The bell rings and everyone goes inside
The bell drones again and everyone gets out...
You and I, we are one
But our bodies make us two...
There you are all peaceful in bed
But thinking about your worries ahead...
In the skies above
See the clouds so high and pure...
(Note: a poem a friend of mine mostly wrote)
When I lost my Ipod...
(Author's note: I am aware of the flaws in this...
The mother is in distress...
Behold my power
The sky is the kingdom I reign...
In the skies above
See the clouds so high and pure...
There you are all peaceful in bed
But thinking about your worries ahead...
"What is this a competition to see who has the largest stretch marks? Mine are bigger than yours!" |
A crowd gets things done, but it takes an individual to inspire that crowd. |
In theory, theory works; in practice, practice works. |